Thursday 18 October 2018

100 word challenge Week one term 4.


Once upon a time there lived a boy called Aaron. He was a very good fighter and every fight he wore his lucky orange socks. He was coming up to a big fight. He was out dancing one night and he danced quite clumsily at that. He was dancing and then he tripped over someone's foot and fell to the ground. He looked at his feet and one of them was bending the wrong way and fainted. One week later the time of the fight Aaron was lying in an ice bath. A BATH.Really,A fighter in a bath.

My Writing Goals from start of term 3

My writing goal from the start of term 3 was to use more specific language in my character descriptions.
I have achieved this because my readers get a clear picture of what I am trying to describe.
In my Shooting Stars descriptions my reader got a clear picture of Egan Tucker from reading my writing.

Sunday 6 May 2018

Reflective Question

Tech because we worked on the group name. My group would benifit because they can focus on the products.

Thursday 15 March 2018

Reflection week 7

This week has been a very exciting week for the year 5-8s. Oprea auditions were this week and they were very exciting. There was also a fixture this week whick southwell played very well in. This week a learnt about simple interest in maths and also about profit and loss. Next week I want to focus during all of my subjects and give a 100 percent effort.

Thursday 8 March 2018

100 word challenge

Brand new boss


I walk into my office one day and I see everyone shaking with fear. Curious, I ask “ What’s wrong”. The point toward the door. I walk through the door to see a new face. A chubby face. “ What are you doing in here ” He screams. “ Sorry sir “ I answer with a quiver in my voice. I walk out the door and he slams it behind me barely missing my rear end. I look at everyone's faces and they look miserable then I think to myself. “ But what is I was in charge?” Everyone would like it A lot more?

Thursday 22 February 2018

100 word challenge


Tree Yoga

Om, om. The Peaceful treemen practice yoga in a small
opening in the wasabi forest. The rice river runs through the
forest. The treemen come from the mountains in the north but
every monththey meet the southern treemen for activities like
yoga or races.The leader of the Northern treemen is called
Shamo and the leader of the Southern Treemen is called
Shama. They are Brother and Sister. There father died
3 years ago and left the Northern Treemen tribe to Shamo
and the Southern to Shama.They miss their father but the lead their Mountain tribes will pride.


Wednesday 14 February 2018

100 Word Challenge


Car Crash

“Mum, how long till we get to the beach” I asked as we zipped
along the highway. “ 20 Minutes “ she replied with an annoyed
tone. I look out the window to see mountains, and in the distance
I spot the beautiful blue water glistening in the sunshine. We
drive up the mountain and through the winding road at a slow speed. We finally get past the winding road and begin our descent towards the coromandel. We reach the bottom of the mountain and drive towards the beach. We were moving very fast when a car drives into our hood. Crash!!!