Thursday 18 October 2018
100 word challenge Week one term 4.
Once upon a time there lived a boy called Aaron. He was a very good fighter and every fight he wore his lucky orange socks. He was coming up to a big fight. He was out dancing one night and he danced quite clumsily at that. He was dancing and then he tripped over someone's foot and fell to the ground. He looked at his feet and one of them was bending the wrong way and fainted. One week later the time of the fight Aaron was lying in an ice bath. A BATH.Really,A fighter in a bath.
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I like your use of the complex prompt! It is very creative. Do you think when you reread your work that you could use the character's name instead of a pronoun in some instances? Could you also connect some ideas using connectives? Continue to develop your use of commas. A good read. Well done.
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