100 word challenge Week one term 4.

Once upon a time there lived a boy called Aaron. He was a very good fighter and every fight he wore his lucky orange socks. He was coming up to a big fight. He was out dancing one night and he danced quite clumsily at that. He was dancing and then he tripped over someone's foot and fell to the ground. He looked at his feet and one of them was bending the wrong way and fainted. One week later the time of the fight Aaron was lying in an ice bath. A BATH.Really,A fighter in a bath.

My Writing Goals from start of term 3

My writing goal from the start of term 3 was to use more specific language in my character descriptions.
I have achieved this because my readers get a clear picture of what I am trying to describe.
In my Shooting Stars descriptions my reader got a clear picture of Egan Tucker from reading my writing.